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Hey Angelina! My Name is Meesha and I am a Year 7 at Saint Patrick's school Greymouth. I really like how much color you used in your presentation and It really described the way you should be commenting. Maybe next time you could add a little blurb describing why you had to do this and maybe add a reflection.
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ReplyDeleteNice work I like the theme of your work and the idea is great being a smart learner is very important. So I think you nailed the key aspects of it. Also you had great information.
You had a really good layout that made the information easy to see and you did it in an intriguing way. I just think the word “thoughtful” could be a bit thicker so that you could see it more clearly. Also you had a good color scheme which made the words pop out more.
I really liked the information that you put in your work. Words like cyber smart, question, positive and safety are very important and are essential when talking about smart learners. I also liked how you put the quality blog comment poster in your work. It is an important part of being a smart learner and is very useful if you want to write a quality blog comment.
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