I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
Wednesday, 1 November 2017
When you go to the seaside, the coldness overcomes you!
The seaside is tranquil and beauteous. When you go into the sea, the powerful dark blue and salty waves splashes onto your body, sending chills down your spine. The coldness overcomes you. The sand smells and tastes salty. The rocks are of all shapes and sizes. The warm sun makes you sleepy and relaxed.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I use adjectives to describe the seaside and record it using screencastify.
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